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Will Collister
Posts : 208
Join date : 2008-01-02
 |  Subject: Write-up?  Sat Jan 19, 2008 4:25 pm | |
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Lockhart
Posts : 241
Join date : 2008-01-12
Age : 38
Location : PT, Portugal
| | Subject: Re: Write-up? Sun Jan 20, 2008 11:54 am | |
| Ill try,
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The "Royal Navy" is a Pirates of the Burning Sea MMO gaming society located on the Roberts (Eu-US) Server.
The Royal Navy is an International active and dedicated gaming Society, with mature members from all over the world within its community, whom between themselves wield several years of gaming experience in all fields of expertise.
Now we prepare our selfs to sail forth into the harsh Caribbean Sea's and we shall sail full speed ahead without fear!
In the Royal Navy we look for fame and fortune, all this while we hunt the enemies of Crown and protecting our own from any threat that may stand.
We have several activities every week under the sail of our Admirals, such has NPC Group Hunting or any type of PvP.
Our societies personal goals are to sail further into the Caribbean story and conquer the enemy of the flag either by direct confrontation or by aiding our friends in need.
We has an active group believe in team work when needed, maturity to deal with all possible situations and above all respect among us.
Has a Society we are more then self sufficient, we are organized and we like to make use of real life Naval tactical use when possible while engaged in combat.
All this is achieved within our friendly community who likes like to Casual RP and always above all have a good laugh!
We stand together in the harshest of times, we stand has the Royal Navy.
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John Quilliam
Posts : 22
Join date : 2008-01-08
Age : 115
| | Subject: Re: Write-up? Sun Jan 20, 2008 2:53 pm | |
| Thank you Admiral Lockhart.
Might I suggest some minor amendments to a very fine piece?
It would be as well if this went through several versions on here before being posted to the wiki so that we are all happy with it.
So please continue the drafting process if you would like to see changes.
The "Royal Navy" is a Pirates of the Burning Sea MMO gaming society located on the Roberts (EU-US) Server.
The Royal Navy is an international, active and dedicated gaming Society, with mature members from all over the world in its community, who between them have several years of gaming experience in all fields of expertise.
Now we prepare ourselves to sail forth into the harsh Caribbean Sea and we shall sail full speed ahead without fear!
In the Royal Navy we look for fame and fortune, all this while we hunt the enemies of The Crown and protect our own from any threat.
We have several activities every week under the flag of our Admirals, such as NPC Group Hunting or any type of PvP.
Our society's goals are to sail further into the Caribbean story and to conquer the enemies of The Crown either by direct confrontation or by aiding our friends in need.
We as an active group believe in teamwork when needed, maturity to deal with all possible situations and above all respect for each other.
As a Society we are more then self sufficient, we are organized and we like to make use of real life Naval tactics when possible while engaged in combat.
All this is achieved within our friendly community that likes like to Casual RP and always above all have a good laugh!
We stand together in the harshest of times, we stand as the Royal Navy.
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Lockhart
Posts : 241
Join date : 2008-01-12
Age : 38
Location : PT, Portugal
| | Subject: Re: Write-up? Sun Jan 20, 2008 3:17 pm | |
| I apologize for the mistakes and sometimes loss of sentence integrity, but has you may know I'm Portuguese and despite me being able to speak and write moderately well, I still make mistakes.
I'm glad that you liked, none the less feel free to change or post anything better.
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CORRECT: All this is achieved within our friendly community that likes like to Casual RP and always above all have a good laugh!
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Will Collister
Posts : 208
Join date : 2008-01-02
| | Subject: Re: Write-up? Sun Jan 20, 2008 4:30 pm | |
| Damned fine write-up! Would be proud to have it up!
And Lockhart, you have tremendously good English for it being a second language and all! Truly tremendous! | |
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Jack Skylighter
Posts : 11
Join date : 2008-01-20
| | Subject: Re: Write-up? Sun Jan 20, 2008 4:36 pm | |
| It is a good wrtie up if i say so myself | |
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Lockhart
Posts : 241
Join date : 2008-01-12
Age : 38
Location : PT, Portugal
| | Subject: Re: Write-up? Mon Jan 21, 2008 6:43 am | |
| Its my third language actually, being Spanish the second.  | |
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RaxDefias
Posts : 41
Join date : 2007-12-30
Age : 41
Location : Essex
| | Subject: Re: Write-up? Mon Jan 21, 2008 9:24 am | |
| - Lockhart wrote:
- Its my third language actually, being Spanish the second.
your just showing off lol | |
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Will Collister
Posts : 208
Join date : 2008-01-02
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Lockhart
Posts : 241
Join date : 2008-01-12
Age : 38
Location : PT, Portugal
| | Subject: Re: Write-up? Wed Jan 23, 2008 6:41 am | |
| - Will Collister wrote:
- Good show! Then you can be our official Spaniard-taunting officer!
Be my pleasure Admiral =) | |
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